Reform: Example 1

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Excerpt from BubbleGum Zone #1, by Bert "SkyKnight" Van Vliet


Original:

     He looked at Sylia, his face suddenly
white.  "Is this picture going to..? I mean
will it...? Was I....?"  She shook her head.
       "No choppers were in the area to
follow you, and nobody else tried.  As far
as AD police are concerned, you're a
mysterious benefactor in a hardsuit.
There's nothing to link this incident to the
Knight Sabers.  We will have to change your
suit's appearance a little, though, just to
help allay any suspicions there might be."
     He sighed, then grinned, looking over
at her.  "You know, I've had a few ideas
about that already," he began tentatively.
     "Later," she said firmly.  "First
you've got to heal up, and then you're going
back into training.  Some of those shots you
took could have been avoided.  And you can't
go around ramming everything.  It's
unprofessional looking."
     "Yes, boss," he sighed humbly.
     She laughed warmly as she stood up. 
"Welcome to the Knight Sabers!"

                        END
                  (for now....)

Formatted: reform -i -sd -t -w bgzone-01.txt

    He looked at Sylia, his face suddenly white.  "Is this picture going
to..?  I mean will it...?  Was I....?"  She shook her head.
    "No choppers were in the area to follow you, and nobody else tried.
As far as AD police are concerned, you're a mysterious benefactor in a
hardsuit.  There's nothing to link this incident to the Knight Sabers.
We will have to change your suit's appearance a little, though, just to
help allay any suspicions there might be."
    He sighed, then grinned, looking over at her.  "You know, I've had a
few ideas about that already," he began tentatively.
    "Later," she said firmly.  "First you've got to heal up, and then
you're going back into training.  Some of those shots you took could
have been avoided.  And you can't go around ramming everything.  It's
unprofessional looking."
    "Yes, boss," he sighed humbly.
    She laughed warmly as she stood up.  "Welcome to the Knight Sabers!"

    END
    (for now....)